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History

  • Oxford
History is not just interesting. History is exciting. The prospect of studying, discussing and debating history for the coming three years is exhilarating.

To many people, history is dead, but to me history is alive. I see the past in the present. When I marched in July in the BERSIH 2.0 rally, history came to life. It was a people's march for clean and fair elections and a landmark event. We had been studying the French and Russian revolutions for A Level History and my mind kept flashing back to 1789 and 1917. Trooping up and down streets, being shot at with water cannons and tear gas by the police and a-firing with revolutionary spirit, I was making history and living out my history books.

I wish to study history. Beyond the knowledge and analytical skills to be gained, it would grow me as person. Studying history makes me reconsider myself. When I read about Napoleon or Caesar, I imagine I am them and they are me. I am inspired to seize my destiny, just as they did. Reading about the Crusades, Holocaust and the horror and folly of humankind makes me question myself. What would I have done in like circumstances? What do I make of such madness? Attempting to answer these questions, I come closer to understanding myself and the world.   	

To me, the world today is the result of everything that has come before. Comprehending the past helps us to understand the present and understanding the present will prepare us for the future. Wherever the study of history leads me, I shall seek to use my knowledge and skills to make a positive impact on the world.

My IGCSE experience further convinced me about history. I was homeschooled. At 16, I prepared for the examinations at a tutorial centre. I sat for five subjects in 2009. The next year, I worked for four months at a call centre, joined an expedition to Mount Kinabalu and studied for two more subjects of interest to me - Economics and History. Unable to find a teacher, I studied History on my own. This is the effort which satisfies me most deeply. I scored highestin History for Malaysia and received the CIE High Achievement Award.   

Yet, history is more than just a subject. I draw upon it for other areas of my life. I listen to recordings of great speeches to inspire me before public speaking competitions. I imagine myself a Roman legionnaire to spur me to scale the highest mountain in South-East Asia, and a Spartan warrior to complete a full triathlon in Singapore this July. I think of great leaders when I myself lead - for instance, during the one-and-a-half years I served in presidential positions in the Junior Public Speaking Club. Because I realize how much history has impacted me and has such a huge potential on how people think and act, I took on a project to lead a focus group of youths to review the Malaysian History Secondary School Syllabus from June to August this year. I also teach English classes weekly to Myanmar refugee boys. Knowing their tragic history compels me to help them. Wanting to more fully experience the cultures I have read about has led me to enjoy languages. I speak English, Malay, Hokkien and French, and I aim to speak 10 languages.

It would be stirring to study history in a place steeped in it. I look forward to studying scholarly works and not textbooks. "The History of the Decline and Fall of the Roman Empire" comes to mind - it is more difficult to read, but I find infinitely more thought-provoking and enjoyable. With my love for history and resolve, studying history at Oxford would be the ultimate progression of my passion, education and growth, and I would jump for joy.
New format · 2026 entry

Restructuring for the new UCAS format

This is a successful statement written under the previous UCAS format. From 2026 entry, the personal statement is three separate answers. Below is a worked example — Economics — showing how a strong answer to each of the three questions reads:

  1. Why do you want to study this course or subject?

    Volunteering at a Saturday food bank in Croydon, I helped a single father of three who had moved into temporary accommodation after a zero-hours contract collapsed. What startled me was not the hardship but the bureaucracy — he had been waiting six weeks for Universal Credit because a payment glitch had reclassified him as self-employed. A Sutton Trust talk by Stephen Machin pushed me from that observation toward the literature on benefit take-up and conditional cash transfers — first Banerjee and Duflo's evidence from rural India and Mexico, then Anna Aizer's recent NBER work on the design of welfare-to-work programmes in the US. I want to study Economics because the question running through these readings — why some welfare systems escape the dependency trap while others reproduce it — has rigorous answers that combine empirical microeconomics, mechanism design, and political economy in a way no other discipline can.

  2. How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?

    Further Mathematics has been the single qualification that has reshaped how I read Economics. Working through the chapter on differential equations let me approach Solow's original 1956 paper rather than the textbook simplification — and seeing convergence as an asymptotic result rather than a guarantee made me sceptical of growth-theory papers that quote "China is converging to the US frontier" without specifying the underlying production-function assumptions. That scepticism became my EPQ. Building on Acemoglu and Robinson's Why Nations Fail and Elhanan Helpman's The Mystery of Economic Growth, I asked why the post-1978 Chinese growth episode fits neither the standard Solow convergence prediction nor the institutional pessimism of the extractive-institutions framework. My answer, framed around within-country variation in property-rights protection across coastal special economic zones, was the most rigorous piece of academic work I have produced. Economics A-level supplied the discipline-level vocabulary — perfect competition, Pareto efficiency, deadweight loss — but the model that has stayed with me is the prisoner's dilemma I first met in Maths Olympiad preparation, which I returned to repeatedly when reading Schelling's The Strategy of Conflict. In History A-level, the unit on the Bretton Woods system gave me the institutional context for Friedman's 1953 essay on flexible exchange rates — a connection that taught me how economic theory and political choice constantly co-evolve.

  3. What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

    For the John Locke Institute 2025 Economics paper I argued — against my initial intuition — that personalised pricing is welfare-improving in aggregate, drawing on Pigou's first-degree price-discrimination framework, Hal Varian's 1989 paper on price discrimination, and the more recent empirical work by Dubé and Misra on ZipRecruiter's pricing experiments. Writing the essay forced me to take seriously the strongest version of the fairness objection — Sandel's argument in What Money Can't Buy that markets reshape the goods they price — and then to build a synthesis that conceded the moral worry while defending the consumer-surplus calculation. I came out of the process convinced that the welfare economics taught at undergraduate level is more subtle than the textbook indifference curves let on. Outside the essay competition, the book that has shaped me most is Katharina Pistor's The Code of Capital. Pistor's argument that property law constructs rather than merely protects economic value runs counter to the standard market-design literature I had been reading, and I have spent two terms working through her chapters on collateral, debt, and shareholder rights alongside the Acemoglu-Johnson critique she draws on. To test the framework against my own context, I built a small dataset on Hong Kong residential property using the publicly released Land Registry data and computed the share of the housing stock held by corporate (rather than personal) entities — a 32-line Python project that taught me more about institutional economics than any chapter I had read on it.

Up to 4,000 characters across the three answers, with a minimum of 350 each. See the official UCAS guidance.